I hate to agree with what has already been said, nothing good comes from the smudge tool, and this is no exception. You took a photo and bent it, and added a little bright dot. Maybe if you drew it, instead of editing a photo, it would have been better. Must better, to me anyway. It would have shown much more effort. The font is also really out of place as well, it doesn't match with anything, making it kind of ugly and unneeded. Maybe try again, not used the smudge tool this time. I hope you get better in the future. c:
thks..im still learning how to use adobe program. so many things to do but still cant understand how it work. once i know how to do this program then i know wht to do from here on. thks for ur advice dream eater........
I agree both of u. Its good and bad. Yes i do need to work in little more but at the same its not that easy to use adobe photoshop. Just expirementing new things as i go. Been awhile i hvnt used it since college 06
This requires a lot more improvement. I, as the viewer have completely no idea as to what to make out this picture. The message, and theme aren't present. Not so much as a slight hint as to how I can find "Faith" in this smudged photograph. The font needs to be changed and the smudge tool needs to not be used excessively. It's looks really unnatural (Unless it was meant to look really abstract) And perhaps using a different camera besides the one your DROID X2.
Critique's are meant for improvement, and personally, I see that he hasn't done anything wrong. It was asked on behalf of you, so be prepared to be toasted if it doesn't quite mean the critic's standards. Call me an asshole if you want, I'm just saying my honest opinion. Like they always say "Can't stand the heat? Get out of the kitchen."
Thk u for ur compliment. Finally someone can understand. Some ppl just being an asshole. Art is art with emotions. At the same time we all need negative and positive critiques inorder to push ourself even beyond.